peer+review+assignments

The peer-review process is meant to encourage your thoughtful engagement with fellow students' projects and writings. I will put all of my reviews here as well. Use them and your peers' comments as guides for your own. You should be thoughtful as you engage the proposals, remembering that comments are meant to help the author (1) understand what it is you see her doing in the proposal, (2) see what type of project he is doing (from an outside perspective, (3) make a better final project/paper. You are encouraged to write directly about the writing style as well. That is, be sure you point to places in the proposals that you see as being weak in presentation. Not sure what the author means? Tell her. Not sure what a paragraph is doing? Tell him. Do grammar, syntax and diction problems mar the flow of the essay? Point out such. But, be sure to locate such questions in terms of the whole project. Be specific as to why the paragraph or idea fails to reach you. Positive comments are encouraged, and you should couch such in terms of the whole project as well. Here are your assigned proposals to read and evaluate. Your name is listed with three names following. Some of you will be getting reviews from four people (for balance). Regarding grades proper: we won't put grades online. When you are done responding, please email your three grades to me. I will then share them anonymously with the writers.


 * adams bogar: paul schumacher, SarahT (and MaxD), Logan Gunzen ||
 * bakhtiari, kurush: blake poppell, kelsey milliman, gavin turner ||
 * beck, dorothy: robert nash, jon hurst, matthew lilley ||
 * carden, james: john reed, bianca beck, paul schumacher ||
 * castillo, paul: robert nash, Matt Lilley, Trinadi Payton ||
 * cermak, jason: blake poppell, paul castillo, logan gunzen ||
 * corbin, dustin: gabe adams bogar, karush bakhtiari, logan Gunzen ||
 * davenport, max: trinadi payton, gavin turner, jon hurst ||
 * doubeltman, yaro: john reed, gavin turner, eric littlejohn ||
 * flanigan, brittany: kelsey milliman, paul castillo, travis williams ||
 * glore, hassaun: tyler stanley, travis williams, danyelM (and alexis O) ||
 * harris, trent: jessica petruzziello, travis williams, kurush bakhtiari ||
 * hill, john: brittany flannigan, danyelM (and Alexis O), karush bakhtiari ||
 * hughes-coleman, mary: eric littlejohn, jason cermak, blake poppell ||
 * hurst, john: brittany flannigan, matthew lilley, danyelM (and Alexis O) ||
 * lambert, robert: paul schumacher, sara sheets, hassaun glore ||
 * lilley, matt: gabe adams bogar, sara sheets, hassaun glore ||
 * littlejohn, eric: brittany flannigan, yaro doubeltman, hassaun glore ||
 * milliman, kelsey: eric littlejohn, sarahT (and MaxD), jason cermak ||
 * mitchell, danyel: dustin corbin, paul castillo, gavin turner ||
 * nash, robert: tyler stanley, yaro doubeltman, danyelM (and Alexis O) ||
 * orellana, alexis: trinadi payton, matthew lilley, jason cermak ||
 * payton, trinadi: jessica petruzziello, alex roman, travis williams ||
 * petruzziello, jessica: john reed, michael sanders, travis williams ||
 * poppell, blake: trinadi payton, sara sheets, matthew liley ||
 * reed, john: blake poppell, michael sanders, mhughes-coleman (and GraylinT) ||
 * roman, alex: robert nash, james carden, mhughes-coleman (and GraylinT) ||
 * sanders, michael: jon hurst, sarah t (and max D), alex roman ||
 * schumacher, paul: kelsey milliman, michael sanders, sarahT (and MaxD) ||
 * sheets, sara: paul schumacher, yaro doubeltman, mhughes-coleman (and GraylinT) ||
 * stanley, tyler: dustin corbin, biana beck, alex roman ||
 * taylor, graylin: gabe adams bogar, james carden, travis williams ||
 * tucker, sarah: tyler stanley, jessica petruzziello, james carden ||
 * turner, gavin: eric littlejohn, kelsey milliman, alex roman ||
 * wiliams, travis: dustin corbin, jon hurst, bianca beck, ||
 * turner, gavin: eric littlejohn, kelsey milliman, alex roman ||
 * wiliams, travis: dustin corbin, jon hurst, bianca beck, ||